User blog comment:RemidoDosol/New Project: Raildex anime Re-edit/@comment-24516349-20140225135349

Hi RemidoDosol!

Sorry for not having responded more frequently.

So, I've watched the 2 seasons according to your re-told story. Though I haven't finished yet, It looks great as far as I'm concerned.

The part where you figured out how the story must have gone when Mikoto started to investigate the level upper case is very precisely! It definitely must have gone that way.

However, there is one thing I would like to point out.

Take place: Index - 1 and Railgun - 9

Mikoto ran off somewhere right after their (Uiharu, Mikoto, Kuroko) meeting with Kiyama. It was sunset already. You said '''Mikoto then ran into Touma and tried to have a fight with him before she met Saten. I think it'd be more logical if Mikoto talked to Saten first then she ran into Touma'''. Because in the sub, Mikoto said "You disappear on us suddenly, I was worried". Do you agree with me that Mikoto cares for her friend more than she does for her own ego (even if she had ran into Touma earlier, she wouldn't have stopped there to fight him because she was worrying for Saten). Also, the sub made it feels like Mikoto ran away right after their split up with Kiyama just so she could catch up with Saten, whom she noticed to have been suddenly disappeared. Therefore, the scene where she met Saten should be placed before the one with Touma.

I do recognize the background in the 2 versions. I think it would be fine if we put this scene before another or vise versal. The background difference was not noticeble, I think.

Very good work, mate!