Thread:Herald of meridian/@comment-1759346-20141222173600

Hello.

I'm fairly new here, but there's one thing about a lot of these articles I've noticed: they're excessive and difficult-to-read, often blocky and gramatically bullet-ridden. I tried to figure out what was going on during the Othinus arc and could barely make it through the first few paragraphs, they were so bad.

Before I step on someone's toes, I'm trying to edit the abilities of various characters to make them simpler to understand, while retaining the information links and basic concepts behind the ability. To start with, Mitsuari Ayu, a character from one of the recent novels. Her ability can be summarized, and I edited it, and provided the reason for that edit.

However, I've had my edits undone twice.

http://toarumajutsunoindex.wikia.com/wiki/Mitsuari_Ayu?title=Mitsuari_Ayu&action=history&cb=824

How should I proceed here? I want to be aggressive about it and wear the other person down, but that seems unproductive. I haven't seen any particular forum threads for discussing article revision.  