Thread:Herald of meridian/@comment-1759346-20141222173600/@comment-5275759-20141223121100

True, there are a fair number of articles which could do with some considerable improvement, which have large portions of text that are somewhat messily written, excessive, a bit wafflely/flowery, and on some occasions, too close to source (and a cause of quite a few headaches/BSODs), though refinement is usually preferred over removal.

(This might not be entirely appropriate but I will say that I did find a couple of the recent additions to Mitsuari Ayu's page to be a little bit sloppy)